What are the significant
issues? Those on which the professor has spent significant
time (at least half a class), and those which recur on practice
exams the professor has given in the past. Thus, you should
begin now to take those practice exams, and come to me to
review your draft answers. We can then work on both your
exam structuring, and determining which are the significant
issues for which you need to prepare.
Many students in the past have commented
that when they reviewed their exams with their professors,
if they did so, they found that they didn’t know the
law or didn’t write a thorough analysis. These are
two sides of the same coin. Thorough knowledge of the material
is critical to writing a good exam, and only you know how
much you need to study to know the material thoroughly. A
thorough knowledge of the material means that you know each
subject precisely. This means, for example, that if a topic
in a given course applies a particular test, you should be
able to state that test in the precise words used by the
court or the professor. The approximate words won’t
do, and won’t allow you to apply the law to the facts
in a systematic way, as you are expected to do on the exams.
Assuming you know the law, and have planned
ahead as to how you intend to discuss issues, how do you
translate that to writing the exam? We are now going to revisit
the idea of IRAC—Issue, Rule, Analysis and Conclusion—that
forms the basis for most types of exam essay answers.
Essay Exam Writing
Writing a good law school exam requires
four things: a solid knowledge of the applicable law; good
issue spotting; an approach to each possible legal issue
organized ahead of time; and good writing.
The solid knowledge of the law can only
come with good preparation through thorough studying and
case briefing, good class participation, both actively and
in note-taking, and good outlining and reviewing of notes
and outlines. There is no substitute for putting in the time
and the hard work.
Issue spotting is in part something that
comes with practice. If you know the law well, and studied
hard, when you see certain fact patterns, they should be
similar enough to those you have seen in cases to suggest
issues. How do you approach an exam to spot issues? If you
learn the material cold, by studying throughout the semester,
you can plan a template of an answer for every significant
issue before you ever take the exam. Then, look for when
the facts trigger an issue. What does that mean? It means,
as you read through the facts, based on your knowledge, certain
facts will trigger particular issues—or, more correctly,
clusters of issues. That is, certain topics go together,
because there are only certain ways to write law school exams.
So, for example, if you see someone getting into a structure
that doesn’t belong to them, it suggests a breaking,
which suggests burglary, so you should be looking for other
facts which deal with the elements of burglary.
Assuming you know the law well, and as
a result you are able to spot issues on an exam, when you
spot the issue, make a brief reference to it on the exam
itself, with a line and arrow drawn to the facts which give
rise to the issue. That way, you both make sure you don’t
forget to address the issue, and you make sure you don’t
forget to use the facts.
Law school essay exams tend to be of two
types, depending on the subject matter. Some are rule-based,
because the subject matter concerns topics that either have
a long history of common law and thus can be phrased in terms
of black-letter law, such as Torts and Contracts, or operate
by a set of statutes or rules, like Civil Procedure, Evidence,
or the Uniform Commercial Code. With these exams, you have
to know each part of the rule (which may have been synthesized
from a series of cases), and then apply the facts to each
part of the rule, even if you don’t think the facts
will apply. You need to show that you thought about whether
the facts apply, because the professor can’t read your
mind.
Others are case-based, like Constitutional
Law and Criminal Procedure. There, the rule is expressed
in case precedent, and you have to know the names, facts,
holding and reasoning of cases. Then, like in Legal Skills,
you would first state the rule as it appears in the precedent
case or cases, and then analogize the question facts to the
cases to reach a conclusion.
Learning the skill of writing essay exams
will have a major impact on your law school grades. Most
of your law school exams will require you to apply principles
of law you have studied to fact situations. This requires
you to identify the legal issues raised by the facts [“issue
spotting”], select and interpret the appropriate legal rules,
apply the rules to the facts, and come to a correct conclusion.
These steps are often referred to by the acronym “I.R.A.C.” Let
us have a more detailed discussion of this approach using
Criminal Law as an illustration.
1. Issue spotting. This
requires identifying potential legal issues raised by the
facts. To do this, you need significant familiarity with
basic rules of legal liability. In criminal law, most nonlawyers
can recognize general patterns such as homicide and theft.
However, you will learn more refined analysis--for example,
when property is taken, you will learn that it may be robbery
if force or fear is used, it may be burglary if there is
an entry into a structure, it may be extortion if there are
threats of future harm, it may be false pretenses if there
is fraud, et cetera.
2. Rule selection and
interpretation. Once you identify the general issue you must
select the appropriate rule. In criminal law, that rule usually
will be found in a statute, except for rules relating to
defenses, which are often defined by the common law. However,
rules often require interpretation. You must recognize ambiguities
or alternatives. Professors use cases to teach you skills
of interpretation. Some of the cases illustrate good interpretation
and some illustrate bad interpretation. You must learn to
recognize the difference or you may find yourself repeating
the bad interpretation on the exam.
3. Application of the
rules to the facts. Where there is more than one interpretation
of the rule, apply the different interpretations in the alternative.
Where the facts are ambiguous, identify the ambiguity and
apply the rule to both alternatives. Where both the rule
and facts are ambiguous, this may result in several alternatives.
If there are factors that make one interpretation of the
rules or the facts better than another, discuss what these
are. If there are several alternatives for establishing the
fulfillment of a rule, then discuss the facts as applied
to each alternative. For example, if “elder fiduciary
abuse” is met by either the wrongful obtaining, retention,
or refusal to return assets of an elder or dependent adult,
then you must discuss the facts as applied to whether the
assets were wrongfully obtained, wrongfully retained, or
wrongfully refused to be returned, and you must discuss both
whether the adult was an elder adult and whether the adult
was a dependent adult. You must show that you have considered
all possibilities, because a judge might not accept your
evidence on one of the possibilities. In applying the rules
to the facts, use connector words of explanation, such as “because” and “since.” For
example: Because Michael threw the rock which hit the bicycle
on which Tommy was riding, causing Tommy to fall, Michael
caused contact with Tommy because the bicycle was closely
connected to Tommy’s body. This ties the facts with
the key words in a rule or sub-rule, and explains why you
have come to a conclusion about whether that rule or sub-rule
was met.
4. Conclusion. If there is more than one
conclusion possible, discuss reasonable alternatives. If
asked, explain which is the better alternative and why. Note
that usually professors will not ask you to select among
alternatives.
This is the basic structure for the analysis
of a single issue. Typically, a problem will involve multiple
issues, and your analysis will have to be modified, depending
on the level where the additional issues arise.
For example, if the overall issue is whether
a buyer of a house has a right to rescind the purchase, the
rule may be stated, “Where the seller has either created
or is aware of a condition which materially affects the value
of the house, and the knowledge of the condition is either
peculiarly that of the seller, or could not, with reasonable
diligence, be discovered by a prudent buyer, the buyer may
rescind the sale.” As stated, you would have to analyze:
(1) whether the seller created the condition; (2) whether,
alternatively (because of the use of the word, “or”),
the seller is aware of the condition at the time of the sale;
(3) whether the condition materially affects the value; (4)
whether the condition was peculiarly within the seller’s
knowledge; or (5) whether, alternatively (because of the
use of the word, “or”), a prudent buyer, with
reasonable diligence, could have discovered the condition.
But, to analyze whether the condition materially affects
the buyer, you would have to apply a further rule: a condition
is material if a reasonable buyer would consider the value
to be less because of the condition. So, even within an IRAC
structure, you may have a further level of IRAC as to an
element or sub-issue. This reinforces the importance of knowing
the law, and knowing how the law is structured. Only if you
knew there was a sub-rule defining what is material would
you be able to IRAC that sub-rule, and give a more complete
answer.
Here is an example: On the most general
level, a fact situation might raise the question of which
rule to use -- e.g., does a given fact situation
constitute larceny or embezzlement? If you determine that
it is larceny, you may still have several issues to discuss,
though in this case the issues would be "subissues" of the
general issue of whether the defendant committed larceny.
For example, if you suspect the facts raise an issue of larceny,
you would use the rule that larceny is the trespassory taking
and carrying away the personal property of another with intent
to steal. You would break the rule down into its elements
(conduct, results, circumstances, and the required mens rea
for each element, if known). This rule then raises the following
issues:
1. Was there a trespassory taking of personal
property?
2. Did it belong to someone else?
3. Was it carried away?
4. Was there intent to steal?
For each of these issues you will have
to identify a rule unless the exam states it as a given.
For example, you may be told the property belonged to someone
else, so you would not have to discuss rules of property
law determining ownership. But on the issue of "was there
a trespassory taking", you may need to provide a rule defining
what is a "trespassory taking." Furthermore, once you discuss
the rule, you may discover further sub-issues. For example,
a taking is trespassory when a person decides to take property
without permission or consent and only has custody of the
property, but not possession. This rule raises the further
issue of when does a person have custody of property rather
than possession.
Some issues may not be a problem in most
cases. For example, if a person took property a mile, that
would obviously meet the requirement of "carried away." But
if a person picked up a baseball in a sporting goods store
and carried it a few feet and did not leave the baseball
department, you might need a legal definition to discuss
this issue.
Consider this in the context of the following
fact pattern/essay question (where the rules are supplied
in the course of describing how you should answer the question):
Owen offered a valuable watch for sale.
Dennis asked to see it, so Owen handed it to him. Dennis
decided he wanted it [permanently], but he could not afford
to buy it, so he ran off with it with Owen in hot pursuit.
Dennis was too fast, and got away with the watch.
What is the Issue? - Was
this larceny?
What is the Rule? - larceny
is the (1) trespassory taking and (2) carrying away of the
personal property (3) of another (4) with intent to steal.
Application - Often you
can choose to apply elements of a rule in any order, but
try to dispense with the easy ones first, or just go in the
order of their appearance in the rule.
(2) Dennis carried away the watch, since
he ran off with it; and (3) the watch belonged to another
(Owen).
(4) Subissue - Did Dennis have intent to
steal?
Sub-Rule: Intent to steal
means intent to permanently deprive the owner of possession. Application: According
to the facts, Dennis decided to keep it permanently when
he carried it away. Conclusion: Dennis had
intent to steal.
(1) Subissue - was the taking trespassory?
Sub-Rule: A taking is
trespassory when a person has been given custody only, and
not possession, and then carries it away without permission
or consent. Sub-subissue A: Did Dennis have
custody only? Sub-subRule: A person has
custody only when the person entrusting him with the property
only gave permission to examine the property in his presence. Application: Owen
was merely letting Dennis examine the watch in his presence.
They had not worked out a sale yet. Conclusion: Dennis only
had custody at the time he formed the intent to steal and
ran off with the watch. Sub-subissue B: Did
Dennis carry away the watch without permission or consent? Application:
Owen only allowed Dennis to have custody. Dennis then ran
away with the watch. Owen obviously had not given permission
as illustrated by the fact he chased after Dennis. Conclusion: Dennis
carried away the watch without Owen’s permission or
consent.
Conclusion on Subissue: The
taking was trespassory.
Overall Conclusion - Since
Dennis had only custody of the watch, when he ran off with
it the taking was trespassory. He carried the watch away.
The watch belonged to another, Owen. Dennis had the intent
to steal. Therefore he is guilty of larceny.
I.R.A.C. illustrates the mental process
you must engage in to solve legal problems. This is not necessarily
the format you would use in writing an essay, but in most
cases, the general structure is the one you would use. This
format can be very verbose, and you may be able to find ways
to express the same ideas more succinctly. One of the most
important refinements of exam writing skill is learning to
be succinct (not wasting time) while not being too cursory
or "conclusory." The term "conclusory" is not found in many
dictionaries, but is a commonly used word in law school.
Unfortunately, it is a common error on law school exams.
You are too "conclusory" when you come to a conclusion without
adequately justifying or explaining it by using the facts
you are given, such as by concluding that Dennis had custody
only, without discussing the facts which support that assertion.
One way to work to avoid this is the general structure: Dennis
had custody only because Owen offered Dennis the watch for
sale, and only handed the watch to Dennis to let him look
at it. However, it is difficult to appreciate what is an
adequate justification or explanation. This is a skill that
must be mastered through trial and error. Students often
correct one problem but end up creating the other -- i.e.,
they try to be less verbose, but become conclusory. For beginners,
it is better to err on the side of being too verbose. You
are more likely to lose points if you are too conclusory.
You won't finish if you are too verbose, but at least you
will get significant credit for what you did.
Here, then is a sample answer to the essay
question. This is not intended as a model or perfect answer.
There are many different ways you could have written and
organized a good answer.
Dennis is guilty of larceny of Owen's watch.
or
Is Dennis guilty of larceny of Owen's watch?
Larceny is the trespassory taking and carrying
away of the personal property of another person, with intent
to steal.
A person commits a trespassory taking when
he takes the property from the possession of another without
permission of the person in possession. You only have custody,
not possession, of property when the person in lawful possession
only allows you to examine property in his or her presence.
Owen only allowed Dennis to examine the watch in his immediate
presence. Therefore Owen retained constructive possession
and Dennis only had custody. When Dennis ran off with the
watch without Owen's permission, this was therefore a trespassory
taking from Owen's possession. The fact that Owen chased
after Dennis shows Dennis did not have Owen's permission
to take the watch away. Running away with the watch and escaping
constitutes the second element of "carrying away" the personal
property of another. The watch was the personal property
of another because the facts state that this watch belonged
to Owen, not Dennis.
Intent to permanently deprive the owner
of his property constitutes intent to steal. Dennis decided
he wanted to keep the watch permanently, but could not afford
to buy it, so he ran off with it. This shows he intended
to deprive the owner of the property permanently. Therefore
Dennis had intent to steal the watch.
Since Dennis engaged in the trespassory
taking and carrying away of Owen's watch, intending to steal
it, Dennis is guilty of larceny.
There are additional things you should
keep in mind in writing an essay answer. First, let’s
talk about rules of law, since the key to a good exam answer
is to get the rule right and on paper. A rule is a general
principle on which decisions are to be based. Some rules
are mandatory (“any person who pays an annual fee of
$100 shall be entitled to a beach access permit”),
some rules are prohibitory (“no person shall enter
into a valid marriage within this state unless they have
first obtained a valid marriage license from the clerk of
the county of their residence”), and some are discretionary
(“the curator of the Louvre may permit flash photographs
to be taken when, in his or her judgment, no damage to art
will result”).
You have already seen that having a rule
is not enough. Some of the words in the rules require explanation
in certain circumstances. You will need two skills in mastering
the lawyerly use of rules. The first skill is language mastery:
the ability to spot ambiguity, and vagueness, and to analyze
abstractions. The second skill is the capacity to think structurally.
A rule is an idea with a structure to it, and in this way,
is like an algebraic formula. The ideas within the rule as
expressed in its language may not have mathematical precision,
but the skill needed is perceiving the structure of an idea,
breaking it down into sub-ideas, organizing the sub-ideas
usefully and accurately, and applying the organized idea
to facts.
Every rule has three distinct components:
(1) a set of elements, which may collectively be called a
test; (2) a result that occurs when the test is satisfied
by the factual presence of all the elements; and (3) a causal
term that determines whether the result is mandatory, prohibitory,
or discretionary. Many rules have one more component: exceptions
that would defeat the result, even if all the elements are
present.
Let’s look at the application of
the rule in a fictional setting. Think through this passage
from Alice in Wonderland:
At this moment the King, who had for some
time been busily writing in his notebook, called out “Silence!” and
read for his book, “Rule 42: All persons more than
a mile high to leave the court.”
Everyone looked at Alice.
“I’m not a mile high” said Alice.
“You are,” said the King.
“Nearly two miles high,” added the Queen.
Okay, what was the rule? [All persons
more than a mile high to leave the court] How
many elements, or parts, does the rule have? [Two—being
a person; and being more than a mile high] What
is the result if the elements are met? [Departure
from the court] Is the causal term mandatory,
prohibitory, or discretionary? [Mandatory—it
must occur] Are there any exceptions? [No] Is
the first element of personhood met? [Yes] How? [Alice
impliedly conceded it and didn’t deny it] Does
Alice challenge the second element? [Yes] What
would happen if the Queen couldn’t prove Alice was
nearly two miles high, and she only proved Alice was 1.235
miles high? [Alice would still need to depart,
because the rule requires any person more than a mile high
to leave, and 1.235 miles is more than a mile] What
would happen if the Queen only proved Alice was 0.985 mile
high? [Alice would not need to depart, because
the rule only requires any person more than a mile high
to leave, and 0.985 mile is less than a mile] What
we have now done is an example of IRAC. The issue is whether
Alice had to depart the Court. We stated the rule, and
broke it down into its parts. We addressed each part, and
whether under the facts, each part was met or not, and
we explained why. Notice, for example, the structure: Alice
would not need to depart, because the rule only
requires any person more than a mile high to leave, and
0.985 mile is less than a mile. We state the conclusion
(“Alice would not need to depart”), but we
then give the reason in terms of both the language of the
subpart of the rule (“the rule only requires any
person more than a mile high to leave”), and the
factual reason (“0.985 mile is less than a mile”),
both linked to the conclusion by the word “because.” Use
this format in writing your exam answers, and you will
avoid just writing conclusions, and you will always analyze
by using the available facts.
Another way to do this is by expanding
IRAC to “TICRA-FLIPC” (pronounced tick-ra-flip-sea)
(with thanks to Professor Dennis Tonsing of Roger Williams
University Ralph R. Papitto School of Law):
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This method lends itself to syllogism.
Consider first the following logical syllogism:
• All men are mortal
• Socrates was a man
• Socrates was mortal
Now consider the following legal syllogism,
using the “under, here, therefore” regime, tied
to TICRA-FLIPC:
• Under Federal Rule
of Civil Procedure 12(a)(1)(A), if an answer to a complaint
is served within 20 days, it is timely.
• Here, defendant A’s answer was served within 20
days because A mailed it out on the 19th day after she was served.
• Therefore, A’s answer was timely.
The importance, then, of understanding
the structure, even if it is so complex that you need to
diagram it, is that once you understand the structure, and
break a rule into its parts, you can explain, in order, whether
or not each part is met by applying the facts to the part.
To sum up then, good exam writing begins
with good exam preparation. Review your notes and outlines.
Anticipate issues and design approaches to them. Write practice
exams.
If you have any questions about any aspect
of the Academic Success Program, please feel free to call
or stop by, or e-mail me at mmainero@law.whittier.edu. I would
be delighted to assist you in any way I can.
Professor Mario Mainero
Director, Academic Success Program
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